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brauche dringend hilfe bei der aufgabe !!

Beitragvon pfote15 » Di 2. Mär 2010, 18:12

hallo
ich schreibe morgen eine englischarbeit und wolllte fragen ob das richtig ist !

Producing more and more goods, factories owners looked for efficient ways to get them to market.
And they soon found them. Bulit during the 18th century, canals now linked towns all britain, made transport of factory goods faster and cheaper.Although carrying people rather than goods, roads also improved.When travelling on the new stagecouches, passangers in 1780 could get from london to manchester in a day-a journey of three days in 1720.Linked by better roads and more canals, towns grew quickly.
Not arriving on the scene until the early 19th century, the railway was certainly the greatest new development in transport.Spreaded quickly around britain and the world, railways becames a symbol of the industrial revolution.It all started in the north-east of England.Opening in 1825, the fist passenger railway in the world ran fron stockton to darlington.After built a locomotive for the stockton-to-darlington line, george stephenson started developing another, his famous rocket.
Completed in time to take part in the competition for the liverpool-manchester line in1829, the rocket won with a speed of 36 miles per hour.

Soo wer was falsches endeckt schreibt bitte das richtigehin und sagt warum .
Bitte schnell um anmtwort und schonmal danke :)
PS: die Wörter die entweder in present oder past participle stehn sind blau.
bitte keine rechtschreibfehler oder so ausser in den wörtern korriegieren
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Re: brauche dringend hilfe bei der aufgabe !!

Beitragvon Achim » Di 2. Mär 2010, 21:39

pfote15 hat geschrieben:hallo
ich schreibe morgen eine englischarbeit und wolllte fragen ob das richtig ist !

Producing more and more goods, factory owners looked for efficient ways to get them to the markets.
And they soon found them. [color=#FF0080]Built[/color] during the 18th century, canals now linked towns all over Britain, made transport of factory goods faster and cheaper.Although carrying people rather than goods, roads also improved.When travelling on the new stagecouches, passengers in 1780 could get from London to Manchester in a day - when it took a journey of three days in 1720.Linked by better roads and more canals, towns grew quickly.
Not invented until the early 19th century, the railway was certainly the greatest new development in transport.Spreaded quickly around Britain and the world, railways becamexsx a symbol of the industrial revolution.It all started in the north-east of England.Opening in 1825, the first passenger railway in the world ran fron Stockton to Darlington. After having built a locomotive for the Stockton to Darlington line, George Stephenson started developing another one, his famous Rocket.
Completed in time to take part in the competition for the liverpool-manchester line in1829, the rocket won with a speed of 36 miles per hour.

Soo wer was falsches endeckt schreibt bitte das richtigehin und sagt warum .
Bitte schnell um anmtwort und schonmal danke :)
PS: die Wörter die entweder in present oder past participle stehn sind blau.
bitte keine rechtschreibfehler oder so ausser in den wörtern korriegieren


Hinter einem Punkt kommt mindestens ein Leerzeichen. Eigennamen werden groß geschrieben.
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